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Advice On Women

A woman can be a fragile thing What you need to know is they’re like a bee that can sting In your arms gentle and kind they may feel What’s inside to be feared is also real When you have that first kiss Your mind goes instantly to future bliss And that’s where the games begin The moment that intellect kicks in You think that you are on equal ground Until those thoughts are proven unsound For in a contest of wills She'll give you more than just the chills Long before the conversation is over you’re worn out Making you want to scream and shout Every point made receives a counter punch It is far better to end it now and have lunch For women travel in a pack Are you ready for a group attack Though your ego will take a blow It is your manhood that must now show Once scorned it is better to go into retreat Revenge is not something to repeat For in the end you will lose it all From their graces you shall fall Better to live another day Than to end it some other way So there you have my advice at best Realizing I say all this in jest

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Date: 4/19/2018 11:34:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andreas. Well done.
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Date: 1/20/2018 3:39:00 AM
Congratulations and best wishes for your win, Andreas - I hope your holidays were great! :-)
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Andreas Simic
Date: 1/20/2018 6:37:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughts.
Date: 1/14/2018 10:59:00 AM
I enjoyed your winning poem. Congrats.
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Andreas Simic
Date: 1/14/2018 12:15:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 1/13/2018 10:48:00 PM
Andreas, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Andreas Simic
Date: 1/14/2018 9:42:00 AM
Hi Eve, Thank you for the congratulations but am not sure how you know this poem is a winner as it is not listed as such on the contest page. Thanks anyway.
Date: 1/6/2018 7:27:00 AM
Jest! I believe you are totally right..."Better to live another day Than to end it some other way" An inner view is the best view...Blessings Andreas
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