Advice On Women

A woman can be a fragile thing 
What you need to know is they’re like a bee that can sting

In your arms gentle and kind they may feel
What’s inside to be feared is also real

When you have that first kiss 
Your mind goes instantly to future bliss

And that’s where the games begin
The moment that intellect kicks in

You think that you are on equal ground
Until those thoughts are proven unsound

For in a contest of wills
She'll give you more than just the chills

Long before the conversation is over you’re worn out
Making you want to scream and shout

Every point made receives a counter punch
It is far better to end it now and have lunch

For women travel in a pack
Are you ready for a group attack

Though your ego will take a blow
It is your manhood that must now show

Once scorned it is better to go into retreat
Revenge is not something to repeat

For in the end you will lose it all
From their graces you shall fall

Better to live another day
Than to end it some other way

So there you have my advice at best
Realizing I say all this in jest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/19/2018 11:34:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andreas. Well done.
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Date: 1/20/2018 3:39:00 AM
Congratulations and best wishes for your win, Andreas - I hope your holidays were great! :-)
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Date: 1/20/2018 6:37:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughts.
Date: 1/14/2018 10:59:00 AM
I enjoyed your winning poem. Congrats.
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Date: 1/14/2018 12:15:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 1/13/2018 10:48:00 PM
Andreas, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Andreas Simic
Date: 1/14/2018 9:42:00 AM
Hi Eve, Thank you for the congratulations but am not sure how you know this poem is a winner as it is not listed as such on the contest page. Thanks anyway.
Date: 1/6/2018 7:27:00 AM
Jest! I believe you are totally right..."Better to live another day Than to end it some other way" An inner view is the best view...Blessings Andreas
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