Advice
Sit my child, listen to what I say,
this advice I have, you could use some day.
Im here to tell you, that to keep your love,
you have to try, beyond and above.
Try so hard, and dont ever quit,
there is no time to rest, no time to sit,
You give everything, everything of your heart,
constantly love her, even when your apart.
Yet you cant stop now, youve got to keep going,
so your love will always, be faithful and growing.
Seems like alot huh, I know my child,
but belive me son, the rewards are wild!
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