Adulting

the roundup of stuffed animals with sad eyes, no pout, no tears tossed together haphazardly adults drink as child disappears 5/23/2019

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Arturo Michael

Date: 5/25/2019 7:50:00 AM

Nice one...except the child never really leaves...but controls the body and mind eventually...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/25/2019 1:07:00 PM

For sure!

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 5/24/2019 11:00:00 AM

Hm, there must be an extra meaning in a here. I don't get it. Anyway, I love such dramas behind the scenes)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2019 12:23:00 PM

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/24/2019 12:22:00 PM Edit Delete Block poet from commenting on your poetry The meaning is what you make it...simple or not...hope you enjoyed.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/24/2019 9:15:00 AM

See what Emile wrote. Please re-read it and remember we are friends, and I can think of nothing better to say. So thank you Emile.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2019 12:21:00 PM

Thank you, sweet friend!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 5/24/2019 6:43:00 AM

Oh, something about this really touched me. Seriously, in a poignant way, these words moved me towards a bittersweet/melancholy type feel. VERY GOOD, SO EFFECTIVE! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2019 12:20:00 PM

Thanks so much! Hugs...Kim

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/23/2019 8:12:00 PM

Nostalgia, with a round of scotch...And btw, the title sure beats 'adultery.' LOL. Great, great write, Kim! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2019 8:26:00 PM

Right!? LOL

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/23/2019 7:47:00 PM

How sad, this scene, how common, xo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2019 8:27:00 PM

Could be!

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/23/2019 7:41:00 PM

What an indelible mark this has made Kim, Aloha wk

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2019 8:27:00 PM

Thanks, William!

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/23/2019 12:39:00 PM

This subtle, yet deep poem, was innovative, captivating, entertaining and three dimensional in character painting a picture in my mind, well done my friend, Emile.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2019 12:48:00 PM

Thanks so much, Emile! <3 Kim