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Adrift In Love's River

I float, I drift, at a slow languid pace, Content to bob, by love’s river carried, Fantasies focused on your lovely face, Immersed in thanks for years we’ve been married; I eddy, swirl, by your side—in my place— As one, we wend, in the tide of God’s grace. January 24, 2017 A Rhyme in 60 Poetry Contest Laura Loo, Sponsor

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Date: 2/3/2017 7:38:00 AM
Lovely write David.
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Date: 2/2/2017 6:57:00 PM
oh I LOVE this one. It's one of the best I have been reading. Congrats for your win.
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David Bose
Date: 2/3/2017 9:50:00 AM
I appreciate it, Andrea. It more or less flowed out my pen by itself--I love it when that happens. Thanks for your encouragement, Dave
Date: 2/1/2017 4:09:00 PM
Hi David, this is beautiful, and moving, captures enormous love and respect for your marital bonds. Very lovely!
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Date: 2/3/2017 9:36:00 AM
Thanks, Paulette. It was really fun to let happen, just kind of wrote itself. I appreciate you compliments. Thanks Again, Dave

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