David Bose Poet Rhyme

Adrift In Love's River

I float, I drift, at a slow languid pace,
Content to bob, by love’s river carried,
Fantasies focused on your lovely face,
Immersed in thanks for years we’ve been married;
I eddy, swirl, by your side—in my place—
As one, we wend, in the tide of God’s grace.



January 24, 2017
A Rhyme in 60 Poetry Contest
Laura Loo, Sponsor

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James Inman February 3, 2017 at 7:38 AM Lovely write David.

Andrea Dietrich February 2, 2017 at 6:57 PM oh I LOVE this one. It's one of the best I have been reading. Congrats for your win. David Bose February 3, 2017 at 9:50 AM I appreciate it, Andrea. It more or less flowed out my pen by itself--I love it when that happens. Thanks for your encouragement, Dave

Paulette Calasibetta February 1, 2017 at 4:09 PM Hi David, this is beautiful, and moving, captures enormous love and respect for your marital bonds. Very lovely! David Bose February 3, 2017 at 9:36 AM Thanks, Paulette. It was really fun to let happen, just kind of wrote itself. I appreciate you compliments. Thanks Again, Dave