Adrift

Merlot filled pottle….
Sad words in a corked bottle
Tides pull full throttle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Penton-Leccese Avatar
November 18, 2010 at 1:52 PM
I love this form of poetry and I very much enjoy your poem. It brought forth pictures in my mind that I simply can not explain. Wonderful write. Lots of Love, ~Misty~
Mehta Avatar
November 18, 2010 at 12:21 PM
What a wonderful rhyming without loosing the expression of your thought, Robb
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