Adrift

noon heat, pink robin
swinging in his blooming tree
whistling wind and song


Written on June 25, 2022
For: Summer Nature Themed Haiku 
Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
For Reference: howmanysyllables.com
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kendrick Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 12:42 PM
Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Sara
Buehler Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 4:57 PM
You have my very deep thanks, Sara. :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 4:48 PM
very lovely imagery. Love it . Congrats on the win
Buehler Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 5:18 PM
Many thanks, Andrea. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 12:55 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely Haiku write. Have a blessed day...............
Buehler Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 1:55 PM
Thank you very much. Hope your day is nice, too. :)
Kitchin Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 7:51 AM
Evelyn, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet haiku!
Buehler Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 11:02 AM
I am honored by my win, and also by your kind words, Tania. Have a blessed 4th of July. :)
Alex Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 4:51 AM
Beautiful scene-creation. Congratulations!
Buehler Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 11:11 AM
Thank you so much for your warm words of congratulations. :)
Wolf Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 7:10 PM
'pink robin' -- Either it's a unicorn, or I have led a disadvantaged life. lol. Great one, Evelyn.
Buehler Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 10:30 PM
There really are pink robins, as I have lately discovered, Gershon. Thank you for the compliment. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 10:18 AM
A pink robin…beautiful in his blooming setting!
Buehler Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 11:22 AM
Thank you very much, Kim.
Poet Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 7:15 AM
Stunning Haiku, Evelyn. Thanks for the good vibes and good luck with the contest.
Buehler Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 11:24 AM
Thank you so much for the positive thoughts and well wishes, :)
Buhagiar Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 11:09 PM
Beautifully described. Hugs
Buehler Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 11:24 AM
Thank you very much, my friend. :)
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