Adorned In Perfection

A lovely morning
Up and dawning at the view  
Calla lilies turn

A breath of air stare
Sunrise kisses the lilacs sigh
God has blessed me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
May 23, 2009 at 2:44 PM
I like your voice on nature and the garden. Sara
Winter Avatar
May 16, 2009 at 6:51 AM
Two of my favorite flowers. Add a few Gerber Daisies and I am completely swept away! Absolutely gorgeous! Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
May 15, 2009 at 3:30 PM
We are blessed by the beauty....a nice reminder to appreciate the gift of each day!! Lovely poem, Laura!~ Carrie
Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 15, 2009 at 2:21 PM
I love your 'morning/dawning' assonance, and 'breath of air stare' and 'lilacs sigh.' So 'musical'!!! Well done honey! Best wishes, Keith
Devonshire Avatar
May 15, 2009 at 2:21 PM
And you have "blessed" us with a beautiful image of the Calla Lilies being kissed by the sun. Lovely haiku, Laura!
Goff Avatar
May 15, 2009 at 1:14 PM
sounds heavenly! Laura! sweet haiku's!!! Jim
Kelly Avatar
May 15, 2009 at 12:37 PM
Doubley adorned , Laura , well done on your perfect morning picture ...
Higgins Avatar
May 15, 2009 at 12:29 PM
This is filled with beauty and elegance...love the last three lines..great writing.
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