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Adorned In Perfection

A lovely morning Up and dawning at the view Calla lilies turn A breath of air stare Sunrise kisses the lilacs sigh God has blessed me

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Date: 5/23/2009 2:44:00 PM

I like your voice on nature and the garden. Sara

Date: 5/16/2009 6:51:00 AM

Two of my favorite flowers. Add a few Gerber Daisies and I am completely swept away! Absolutely gorgeous! Love, Shar

Date: 5/15/2009 3:30:00 PM

We are blessed by the beauty....a nice reminder to appreciate the gift of each day!! Lovely poem, Laura!~ Carrie

Date: 5/15/2009 2:21:00 PM

I love your 'morning/dawning' assonance, and 'breath of air stare' and 'lilacs sigh.' So 'musical'!!! Well done honey! Best wishes, Keith

Date: 5/15/2009 2:21:00 PM

And you have "blessed" us with a beautiful image of the Calla Lilies being kissed by the sun. Lovely haiku, Laura!

Date: 5/15/2009 1:14:00 PM

sounds heavenly! Laura! sweet haiku's!!! Jim

Date: 5/15/2009 12:37:00 PM

Doubley adorned , Laura , well done on your perfect morning picture ...

Date: 5/15/2009 12:29:00 PM

This is filled with beauty and elegance...love the last three lines..great writing.