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Adorned in perfection

A lovely morning Up and dawning at the view Calla lilies turn A breath of air stare Sunrise kisses the lilacs sigh God has blessed me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/23/2009 2:44:00 PM
I like your voice on nature and the garden. Sara
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Date: 5/16/2009 6:51:00 AM
Two of my favorite flowers. Add a few Gerber Daisies and I am completely swept away! Absolutely gorgeous! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/15/2009 3:30:00 PM
We are blessed by the beauty....a nice reminder to appreciate the gift of each day!! Lovely poem, Laura!~ Carrie
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Date: 5/15/2009 2:21:00 PM
I love your 'morning/dawning' assonance, and 'breath of air stare' and 'lilacs sigh.' So 'musical'!!! Well done honey! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 5/15/2009 2:21:00 PM
And you have "blessed" us with a beautiful image of the Calla Lilies being kissed by the sun. Lovely haiku, Laura!
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Date: 5/15/2009 1:14:00 PM
sounds heavenly! Laura! sweet haiku's!!! Jim
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Date: 5/15/2009 12:37:00 PM
Doubley adorned , Laura , well done on your perfect morning picture ...
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Date: 5/15/2009 12:29:00 PM
This is filled with beauty and elegance...love the last three lines..great writing.
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