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Adoration

If I was the artist The painter The world would be my high Painting sheets of clouds with my brush Like this day The clouds would be paving a hallway for the waking sun There would be freckles of young clouds ready to play The world would start orange with excitement and adventure If I was that artist The painter The sun would wear her sleeves high Her sides curvy, sexy and luscious And like this day, The quarter moon would stay watch until the sun reached climax There would be stripes for every tribe for harmony And the underground, like the marble cake, would swirl in love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/13/2015 7:44:00 PM
I like everything about this. The imagery and personification, the form, the topic of those lush sunny days with just enough clouds to keep it interesting, and the absolute feeling of joy and peace. a 7 definitely. jan
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/13/2015 9:01:00 PM
Thank you so much Janet for those beautiful words.
Date: 3/13/2015 7:00:00 PM
What a wonderful creation of words. As an Oil painter myself I could see the flow of the brush on the canvas (the sky) with brilliant colors . a 7 ++++++ :) You are already an artist of words a poetess !!!
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/13/2015 9:00:00 PM
Wow Eve I didn't know you are an oil painter. You are so lucky. Yo can paint and write, that's a gift. Thank you so much for your visit.

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