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Adoption of Despair

Soul poured out wild and bitter malice Wants nobody to visit a hospitable palace Who will appreciate the sincere heart? Find yourself in solitude is a great art Without companions for the battle goes warrior And in case of death, he'll not be sorrier.

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Hai Hon

Date: 12/24/2018 2:12:00 AM

Thank you sincerely for your attention and comment! I mentioned the war as a conditional image, because it is unlikely that I would have to get into real fighting.) The purpose of the poem is to denounce human heartlessness, the wholesale disease of our time. I also wish you a happy Christmas, although I myself celebrate January 7th.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/23/2018 9:48:00 AM

Love reading your verse, Hai. War is not a good thing for those brave soldiers that put their lives in front of death and some don't appreciate it .Merry Christmas to you and your family and friends. Hugs Eve.~`*