Adoption of Despair

Soul poured out wild and bitter malice
 Wants nobody to  visit a hospitable palace
 Who will appreciate the sincere heart?
 Find yourself in solitude is a great art
 Without companions for the battle goes warrior
 And in case of death, he'll not be sorrier.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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December 24, 2018 at 2:12 AM
Thank you sincerely for your attention and comment! I mentioned the war as a conditional image, because it is unlikely that I would have to get into real fighting.) The purpose of the poem is to denounce human heartlessness, the wholesale disease of our time. I also wish you a happy Christmas, although I myself celebrate January 7th.
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December 23, 2018 at 9:48 AM
Love reading your verse, Hai. War is not a good thing for those brave soldiers that put their lives in front of death and some don't appreciate it .Merry Christmas to you and your family and friends. Hugs Eve.~`*
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