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Adonis Gave His Wood Anenome

Problem with Adonis was his dogged tendancy 
To battle heartfelt causes
Ominous obdurate tore us
Tenure, he died fighting against white supremacy 

Before he departed, dear reader, acres of passion 
Burnt sharper than stars
Aches when we're apart
Tap water sureity came each time turn on happened

I never knew how he loved me so tight, intensely 
I admit I present aesthetic enough
Adonis possessed man's best stuff
A muscle hung magnate, somehow meant for me

It fell in co inciding with cruel hook moon crescent 
Night prior to my darling's departure 
Anenomes bent by dancing's laughter
Crushed beneath our undulations, entwine pleasant

Million finger foliage, amorous wood anenome reach
Myriad of green furrowed feathers
Held my hips, to his vigour tethered 
My insides hummed tremors' tune, tangy blush peach

Trampled anenomes watched our praise of abandon
Petal centres shared precious nectar
Raised my buttocks, Adonis so tender
Readily able to press me closer, carefully one hand on

Electrified legs, sent buzzing from his matching forge
Intermittent rippled shoulder kisses 
As he sank to me, summoned blisses 
Melted insides drizzle seasoned gyrating bones scorch

Ripped from my conciousness, entirely on his platter
Patch of anenome puff flattened
Melded forever in larva orgasmed
Minted delivery of ecstasy, the world ceased to matter

Firm dedication remaining, reluctant shapely loins lifted
Plucked a hundred secret seed filled tributes
One by one, delicately on my body, distributes
Jealous stars sizzled, shot to oblivion by romance gifted



                

                13th September 2020 


           ' Night of Passion and Desire' 
               Sponsor:  Faraz Ajmal

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 10/10/2020 12:44:00 PM
Oh, the passion showed by Adonis on his farewell night, he sure seemed like a romantic fella, many congratulations on your win in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 10/11/2020 3:04:00 AM
Thank you for hosting it, Faraz. This was buckets of fun to write!
Date: 9/13/2020 6:36:00 AM
Fantastic Sigrid like the Himalayan giant lily, can take up to 8 years to flower but then oh boy a spectacle to behold, beware all men this woman has recovered her appetite, in this beautiful torrid alluring poem, go out there and knock them for six Aphrodite cheers David
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/13/2020 11:36:00 AM
A beautiful comment..... very thoughtful, knowledgeable. You're a dear.

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