Adjectives of Me

lovely accomplishments
persuasive with my hand
wrote not only to the lonely soul
my time before the sand

as with a clue my life saw thin
the hour glass and sand
thus future independent clause
befalls this mortal man
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Wesley Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 9:52 PM
Ah yes Johnny, the sand never stops through the hourglass, and mortal man pays no heed. Well said.
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