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Adios To Those Blues

I wish you could bottle happiness Into sprinkles colourful and sweet So when you are feeling grumpy or blue You can have a little to eat You could have them in any drink Mixed with any food Whatever takes your fancy To brighten your sombre mood You could sneak some into others Those who need a definite dose The grumpy sad or miserable To those blues its ADIOS !!

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Paul Willason

Date: 5/28/2023 5:26:00 PM

Now there's a good idea Deb...you should patent the remedy. Put me down for a bottle or two. Made my morning. Glad you used the term "sprinkles", I think the Aussie nomenclature is "hundreds and thousands" just wouldn't fit nto any poem. Take care...

Deb M
Date: 5/29/2023 1:26:00 AM

Hi Paul….yes sprinkles is universal….hundreds and thousands perhaps only understood by Aussies! Ive put you down for two bottles! Its a special at the moment…..buy 2 get 1 free!! Bargain….!Always lovely to see you Paul …Debx

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 5/28/2023 4:53:00 PM

Bye, bye blues That's good news Nice to hear colourful spinkles cheer Great Idea

Deb M
Date: 5/29/2023 1:28:00 AM

Here here!! Ha…..thanks lovely Shirley! Debx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/28/2023 3:21:00 PM

A wonderful idea, adorably expressed, Deb!

Deb M
Date: 5/29/2023 1:27:00 AM

Aww thanks Ilene…..l will your order in!! Debx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/28/2023 10:47:00 AM

Every home should keep a bottle handy you never know when you might need some. Tom

Deb M
Date: 5/29/2023 1:27:00 AM

Everyday Tom hehe!! Debx

Lin Lane

Date: 5/28/2023 8:49:00 AM

Ha, Deb! I wish they were available over the counter. A prescription would never be enough doses for the grumpy, sad and miserable ones we know. I'm glad you've said Adios to the blues. You never deserved to have them.

Deb M
Date: 5/29/2023 1:33:00 AM

Thanks Lin….l never hold on to the negatives l deal with them and always move forward….so no blues for me! Perhaps swigging bottles and bottles of these happiness sprinkles daily helps haha!! Thankyou for your caring words…. Debx