Adios Juanita

You told me there would be no other, 
and I would be your only lover,
together our two hearts would always beat as one.

But those damn tours kept getting longer,
while your desires kept getting stronger,
till they exploded like a bullet from a gun.

Your shattered promises ripped the seams,
of my innocent and sacred dreams,
and all those vows we once made are now dead and gone.

All those words our love had once spoken,
mean nothing now that they’ve been broken,
you can’t step back across that line once it’s been drawn.

Felt like my heart had cracked and shattered,
and there was nothing left that mattered,
all those demons tried to convince me life was gone.

The gun was cocked, and I was ready,
but I could not hold my hand steady,
that’s when I realized that life must still go on.

The hardest thing that I’ve had to do,
was to face that unforgiving truth,
it’s time for me to start my life over again.

Dark days bled to brighter tomorrows,
now I have overcome the sorrows,
and silenced all the voices I had held within.
 
So, please don’t ask me for forgiveness,
cause as the devil is my witness,
I know that everything you said was just a lie.

Even if I was to believe you,
I am not going to mislead you,
don’t love you enough anymore to even try.

Say adios to me Juanita,
I know now that I do not need ya,
and there will be no more tears falling from my eye.

Because the one thing I know for sure,
as I was walking right out that door,
don’t love you enough anymore to even try.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Fisher Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 5:06 PM
This is a poetic masterpiece! Full of angst, loss...and so well written. A Fave.
Brotherton Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 5:38 PM
Thank you David. I must say though, it is a song lyrics about someone else.
Greenhough Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 1:52 PM
I enjoyed this good bye poem. It sounds like there was nothing too deep and both will be fine.
Brotherton Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 5:30 PM
Life moves on. Thanks for your kind comment.
One Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 11:56 AM
A deep and emotive poem which offers a poignant exploration of heartache, resilience, and the transformative power of self-love. Through its vivid imagery and emotional honesty, it captures the universal experience of navigating the complexities of human relationships and finding strength in the face of betrayal... many will relate to this one..
Brotherton Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 5:28 PM
Thank you Silent One. This one is another poem that has also evolved into a lyric. It was ready for recording when the artist lost three fingers in an accident.
Rolland Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 10:16 PM
not easy to break a relationship, why asking pardon ? you "nailed" it galantly, no regrets and life goes on, thanks for the touching poem
Brotherton Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 5:23 PM
Thanks Yann, I appreciate you dropping by, my friend.
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