Adieu Summer

Adieu Summer
cheeky red roses silky scarlet skirts sashay… final summer fling
09-16-2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gauthier Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 9:18 AM
Beautiful imagery. Well done, Pandita.
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February 10, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Line, thank you so very much! I appreciate your kind comments which are so supportive and inspirational! Have a great day, my friend!Pandita
Mohammad Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 2:47 AM
Perfectly Done..The few words of your poem describes the big meaning...Great Job
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October 14, 2014 at 8:45 PM
Hi Bohari, thank you very much for selecting my poem to read and thank you for your kind compliments and continued support. Warmest regards. Pandita
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October 8, 2014 at 9:50 AM
Nicely written Pandita. I love your title. Verlena
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October 8, 2014 at 11:18 AM
Hi Verlena, thank you so very much for stopping by and leaving me your always wonderful compliments. Pandita
Tidd Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 1:09 PM
You do well with the haikus.
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October 7, 2014 at 4:26 PM
Hi, my friend! Thanks for stopping by. It's good to hear from you. I appreciate you kind comments as always. I love haikus and I am trying my pen at improving the imagery:-). Pandita
Austin Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 5:40 PM
Great color and movement here, Pandita. Love it. Love, daver
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October 7, 2014 at 9:43 AM
Hi Daver, thank you very much for selecting my poem to read and thank you for your kind compliments and continued support. Warmest regards. Pandita
Parmar Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 7:20 AM
Sweet lines
Parmar Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 3:31 AM
To u too pandita
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October 5, 2014 at 11:47 AM
Vaibhav, thank you so very much! I appreciate your kind comments which inspire me even more! Have a great day, my friend!Pandita
Duggan Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 7:04 PM
Pandita, what absolutely beautiful words, we are saying hello summer, have a great day my dear and take care...............Vera.......
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September 26, 2014 at 6:54 AM
Hello Vera, it is so nice to hear from you! Thank you so very much for your compliments on this piece! Stay well, dear lady, and enjoy a wonderful weekend! Pandita
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September 22, 2014 at 11:33 AM
love this, can't wait till the next one,,,summer and your poetry that is...
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September 23, 2014 at 7:21 AM
Hi Harry, I am so happy that you appreciate my humble efforts! Thank you my friend! Pandita
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September 22, 2014 at 9:25 AM
Hi Pandita! What a fittingly beautiful way to bid goodbye to summer! Lovely haiku that has imagery to show it off...and a great ending. Well done. // paul
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September 23, 2014 at 7:48 AM
My dear Paul, you made my day with your sweet compliments about my work and about my avatar:-)! It's always great to hear from you. Many thanks, my friend! Have a wonderful day!
Callus Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 9:26 AM
...congrats on a lovely avatar:)
Kithinji Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 3:18 AM
Adieu, indeed, C'est moi.
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September 23, 2014 at 7:24 AM
Many thanks,Gerald. I appreciate your kind words! Thanks for the visit! Pandita
Anish Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 10:47 PM
Great alliteration here! Yes, time marches on - we must make the best of it! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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September 23, 2014 at 7:23 AM
Hi Matthew, thank you so very much for stopping by and leaving me your wonderful compliments. Pandita
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September 21, 2014 at 8:30 AM
very beautifully painted vision
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September 21, 2014 at 1:15 PM
Hi Liam, thank you very much for selecting my poem to read and thank you for your kind compliments and continued support. Pandita
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September 20, 2014 at 10:14 AM
O Pandita, you are magical.A picturesque farewell to summer. Loved it very very much. Hugs!
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September 20, 2014 at 11:09 AM
Hi Rajat, thank you so very much for complimenting my work. I really appreciate your kind words and I am happy you enjoyed this piece! Warmest regards. Pandita
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September 18, 2014 at 4:47 AM
- Beautiful haku, Pandita ..... but, sad to say goodbye to summer - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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September 18, 2014 at 10:54 AM
Anne-Lise, many thanks. I always appreciate your kind compliments and support! Pandita
Mcdaid Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 2:37 PM
really refreshing beautiful piece
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September 17, 2014 at 7:50 PM
Hi Liam, thank you so very much for stopping by and leaving me your wonderful compliments. Pandita
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September 16, 2014 at 3:09 PM
Wow, I really like this one, Pandita. Awesome haiku!
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September 16, 2014 at 3:41 PM
Andrea, I am so happy that you appreciate my humble efforts! Thank you my friend! Pandita
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September 16, 2014 at 2:43 PM
Beautiful imagery! Excellent write! Kika
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September 16, 2014 at 3:38 PM
Many thanks, Kika. I appreciate your kind words! Thanks for the visit! Pandita
Allison Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 10:48 AM
very colourful haiku Pandita:-) Hugs Jan xx
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September 17, 2014 at 7:49 PM
Many thanks, Jan, I always appreciate your kind compliments and support! Pandita
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September 16, 2014 at 8:21 AM
Very nice haiku! enjoyed it. xxxx D
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September 16, 2014 at 8:23 AM
Dorian, thank you so very much for complimenting my work. I really appreciate your kind words and I am happy you enjoyed this piece! Warmest regards. Pandita
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