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Adieu

Stars were winking on the sky
and it was a surreal night
spring was caressing the sweet air
the aura was in flair.
We walked a few furlongs side by side
said everything in silence as we did stride
then time came to say goodbye
again we said nothing but only smiled.
My heart was beating high, and bosom was uptight
I bet you felt that vibes right
Was it crush or love? hard to opine
but my feeling was peerless, 
like a child playing with snowflakes in early sunshine.
I wish you all the best my friend
hoping this is not the end
and we would meet again, may be on the bank of the Volga
or in a forest where the wind blows away leaves from aspens.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/6/2015 9:19:00 AM
Very well done with wonderful feeling and depth. Your words of superb imagery gently take the reader into the story. Emile.
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Nirode Ray
Date: 5/6/2015 6:36:00 PM
Thank you very much, Emile.
Date: 3/25/2015 1:54:00 AM
Beautiful pen Nirode, sure enjoyed your piece, dear friend. Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :-) D."
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Nirode Ray
Date: 3/25/2015 8:14:00 PM
Hi Dorian, thanks for your sweet words.
Date: 3/24/2015 4:21:00 PM
Such beautiful write but oh such a sad ending:-( Hugs jan xx
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Nirode Ray
Date: 3/25/2015 8:19:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jan xx.

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