Adieu

aching it hurts so bad i can't stand it all the pain makes me sad sobbing it hurts so much i can't look at you without missing your touch pacing my tears run dry i can't stop thinking that i'd just rather die pondering thinking of you wondering why we just had to say adieu
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Thomas Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 5:05 AM
This poem inspires me...
Thomas Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 5:03 AM
Nice poem Juli-Michelle ; )
Mcconnell Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 3:24 PM
Nice piece Juli-Michelle, liked this shows great promise, nice rhyme and flow.
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