Adieu

Her billowing dress beckons me Her bouncing curls wave to me. Her retreating footsteps fading away Her diminishing frame bidding me adieu. I realise my mistake - too late. I never valued her love- bad fate.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 11/5/2024 7:26:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Robert Sidwell

Date: 3/29/2024 10:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win for this well written piece! A lot covered in a few lines and very emotive!

Leena Auckel
Date: 10/1/2024 2:13:00 AM

Thank you so much!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/27/2024 4:20:00 AM

Congratulations, Leena! Your poem is a masterpiece, creating emotions with elegance. The imagery captures the poignant moment of realization and regret. I loved how your words left an indelible impression. Congratulations on your well-deserved victory in the poetry contest! - Blessings, Daniel

Leena Auckel
Date: 10/1/2024 2:14:00 AM

Thank you for reading and giving a feedback!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/26/2024 6:12:00 PM

Love should always be valued and never under estimated, I really enjoyed your entry, congrats on your win :)

Leena Auckel
Date: 10/1/2024 4:13:00 AM

Thank you so much!