Adieu

Her billowing dress beckons me Her bouncing curls wave to me. Her retreating footsteps fading away Her diminishing frame bidding me adieu. I realise my mistake - too late. I never valued her love- bad fate.

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Robert Sidwell

Date: 3/29/2024 10:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win for this well written piece! A lot covered in a few lines and very emotive!

Daniel Caplin

Date: 3/28/2024 11:40:00 PM

Good Morning Leena , what a beautiful poem of Man's inability to realise the beauty of love not for a day but always, and Time's regret lives long after the parting. Beautiful poem . Congratulations a well deserved win . Daniel

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/27/2024 4:20:00 AM

Congratulations, Leena! Your poem is a masterpiece, creating emotions with elegance. The imagery captures the poignant moment of realization and regret. I loved how your words left an indelible impression. Congratulations on your well-deserved victory in the poetry contest! - Blessings, Daniel

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/26/2024 6:12:00 PM

Love should always be valued and never under estimated, I really enjoyed your entry, congrats on your win :)