'adeus'

After all this time Dare we go there? Eventually we have no choice Unknowingly the decision was made for us So although I am a little sad this is adieu; until we meet again *Gerald (suggestion of the word in Portuguese) & Jack (his persistency :) Hope you are not disappointed* ©146011092013

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/17/2013 6:49:00 PM

this is very nice, Wilma.It was not in my contest, was it?

Honestly J.T.

Date: 9/16/2013 1:20:00 AM

I know I'm not disappointed. I like it. Good poem

Poet Tacito

Date: 9/11/2013 8:28:00 AM

Very well expressed! As a really good song goes, "Sometimes goodbye is a 2nd chance". Nicely done!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/11/2013 7:19:00 AM

...... do you mean goodbye .... (here P-soup???????????) - Wilma, I'm very sad ...HOPE it is "only a poem!" !!!!!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/11/2013 7:36:00 AM

- Delighted to hear your reply !! :)))) - Big hugs !!!!

Jack Ellison

Date: 9/11/2013 7:11:00 AM

Please tell me this is only a poem... right? You ain't going nowhere... right? Love ya! Big hugs, Jack xoxox

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/11/2013 6:36:00 AM

This is a wonderfully creative write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this morning! What a delightful piece, such a dynamic poem, Great Work!!