'adeus'

After all this time
Dare we go there?
Eventually we have no choice
Unknowingly the decision was made for us  
So although I am a little sad this is adieu; until we meet again


*Gerald (suggestion of the word in Portuguese)  & Jack (his persistency :)
Hope you are not disappointed* 

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Dietrich Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 6:49 PM
this is very nice, Wilma.It was not in my contest, was it?
J.T. Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 1:20 AM
I know I'm not disappointed. I like it. Good poem
Tacito Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 8:28 AM
Very well expressed! As a really good song goes, "Sometimes goodbye is a 2nd chance". Nicely done!
Andresen Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 7:19 AM
...... do you mean goodbye .... (here P-soup???????????) - Wilma, I'm very sad ...HOPE it is "only a poem!" !!!!!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Andresen Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 7:36 AM
- Delighted to hear your reply !! :)))) - Big hugs !!!!
Ellison Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 7:11 AM
Please tell me this is only a poem... right? You ain't going nowhere... right? Love ya! Big hugs, Jack xoxox
Sivey Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 6:36 AM
This is a wonderfully creative write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this morning! What a delightful piece, such a dynamic poem, Great Work!!
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