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She said "am addicted to soup" He said "if you drink more wine, you'll be reciting your poems topless on my deck" She said "that's a whole poem" He said "she is laying on the shoe with her paws in the shoes" She said "we are so drunk".

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Date: 2/21/2015 1:15:00 AM
Nice word delivery and elocution
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/21/2015 9:54:00 PM
Thank you Lewis. I very much appreciate your visit.
Date: 2/15/2015 8:34:00 PM
Different and funny. Well written to what you want to express Njeri... Making sense is never easy when you have drink to much wine. Verlena
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/18/2015 3:55:00 PM
That's true Verlena. thanks and good day.
Date: 2/14/2015 5:54:00 AM
Brilliant!....enjoyed this realist beat...btw...thanks for the comment..Peter
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/18/2015 3:53:00 PM
Thanks Peter
Date: 2/14/2015 12:59:00 AM
WOW, Njeri now that's a picture to write about. Enjoyed. happy Valentines..... SKAT
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/18/2015 3:52:00 PM
Thanks SKAT

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