Njeri Hunjeri Poet Narrative

Addicted Too

She said "am addicted to soup"
He said "if you drink more wine, you'll be reciting your poems topless on my deck"
She said "that's a whole poem"
He said "she is laying on the shoe with her paws in the shoes"
She said "we are so drunk".

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Lewis Nyaga February 21, 2015 at 1:15 AM Nice word delivery and elocution Njeri Hunjeri February 21, 2015 at 9:54 PM Thank you Lewis. I very much appreciate your visit.

Verlena S. Walker February 15, 2015 at 8:34 PM Different and funny. Well written to what you want to express Njeri... Making sense is never easy when you have drink to much wine. Verlena Njeri Hunjeri February 18, 2015 at 3:55 PM That's true Verlena. thanks and good day.

Peter Lewis Holmes February 14, 2015 at 5:54 AM Brilliant!....enjoyed this realist beat...btw...thanks for the comment..Peter Njeri Hunjeri February 18, 2015 at 3:53 PM Thanks Peter

Skat A February 14, 2015 at 12:59 AM WOW, Njeri now that's a picture to write about. Enjoyed. happy Valentines..... SKAT Njeri Hunjeri February 18, 2015 at 3:52 PM Thanks SKAT