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Addicted To Haiku

field of flowers -

a butterfly feeds

his addiction
							
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Hi-Ku 3 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand
Placing: N/A

© December 2020

Copyright © Paul Callus | Year Posted 2020

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Iris E. Sankey- Lewis Date: 4/28/2021 6:04:00 PM This is beautiful in every way, Paul. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 5/8/2021 7:52:00 AM Thank you Iris. Pleased to have you stopping by. Regards // paul

Timothy Hicks Date: 4/18/2021 3:47:00 PM A feast for the senses ... (have you considered giving an intervention to Mr. Butterfly?) Login to Reply Timothy Hicks Date: 4/18/2021 3:49:00 PM Jokes aside. It really is a striking image. I always think of how pretty the butterfly is, a living-breathing piece of artwork. But oddly enough never put much thought into what the butterfly actually does all day (feeding his addictions, I suppose, like everyone else).

Phyllis Babcock Date: 3/20/2021 3:35:00 PM How can the butterfly not be addicted to all that beautiful colour in the flowers. Wonderful haiku Paul. love phyl Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 3/21/2021 6:39:00 AM Thank you, Phyllis. Had I been a butterfly I am sure I'd be greatly tempted, as well :) Best regards // paul

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/1/2021 7:12:00 AM Such a remarkable haiku, Paul. I would have given this a high place in any contest. Best wishes for the new year, Carolyn Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 1/2/2021 1:31:00 PM That you, Carolyn....your generosity is appreciated:) I hope you entered the new year with your right foot first:) Hugs // paul

Panagiota Romios Date: 12/31/2020 3:53:00 AM Perfect Haiku. I know you are a master at these Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/31/2020 10:11:00 AM Thank you so much, Pangie! Wishing you a Happy and Blessed new year. // paul

Jack Horne Date: 12/28/2020 12:35:00 PM just seen Andrea's comment that this amazingly wasn't a winner - well, it sure is a big winner in my book Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/31/2020 10:15:00 AM You are too kind, Jack...thank you! Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/24/2020 6:53:00 PM oh I LOVE this !! Did it win?? If not, you got robbed!! Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/25/2020 2:13:00 AM I have just checked...N/A....luckily did not get an HM :) Thank you, you rock :) Have a lovely day!! // paul

Angela Crabtree Date: 12/22/2020 4:19:00 PM This is great, Paul. You have a knack for writing Haiku's. I love butterflies :) Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/23/2020 6:00:00 AM Thank you, Angela:) Butterflies are both lovely and inspiring. Have a lovely day. // paul

Alexis Y. Date: 12/22/2020 10:11:00 AM WoW!Paul, This is a lovely entry for the contest. Beautiful photo as well. I love butterflies too. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/22/2020 11:52:00 AM You are too kind, Alexis...Thank you for the lovely comments. Have a satisfying day day:) Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/22/2020 8:53:00 AM Love it! Haiku yes! Butterflies - check, garden of flowers - check, haikus on steroids! Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/22/2020 11:39:00 AM Thank you, Kim...I'm reading your lovely comments with a smile:) Best regards to you. // paul