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In his youth, he loved to drink beer As the years passed, he discovered liquor He drank and drank, without any fear Even when he had to talk to the bailer His family tried their best to stop his drinking Leaving him alone and without his relations Hoping there would be more time for thinking And maybe he would remember his lessons Nothing they did ever stopped his taste for booze In spite of the many problems that came around And even though he had plenty he would lose His drinking was so well known it was renowned Finally, on a dark and dismal night in June He lay alone and answered the call of death It was his time even though he thought he was immune To the time that had come when he lost his last breath Dark Poem Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Anthony Biaanco Written 2014, Entered in contest today, November 3, 2020

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Date: 8/23/2014 12:17:00 AM
It's often their sad fate to die this way. Well done for this contest, Regina. My son, I fear, is an alcoholic. He is drinking after work as well as weekends and not just one or two beers. he has gotten so heavy too. He is a lawyer and I am just sad that he is throwing his life down the toilet when he has a family and so much to live for.
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Date: 8/22/2014 12:30:00 PM
a riveting work, regina... how you illustrated this kind of addiction brought me there in the scene... lovely piece... huggs
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Date: 8/22/2014 2:14:00 AM
such a sad story Regina - I have also written on alcohol addiction based on what is happening in an old friend's life - makes me so so sadto see her destroying not only her life but those around her too:-( Good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xxx
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 8/22/2014 6:20:00 AM
Thanks Jan... This was my favorite uncle. I miss him terribly. He died in 1998. He was SO loving and kind and gentle... a gentle giant at 6'4". Thank you for your kind comments and God bless you. Love and prayers, Gina

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