Addicted Part 2

It came back around and said, "I know you like to party."
He gave me a red cup, a little Coke, and Bacardi.
The Devil working hard, attaching himself to my body
He's scratching and clawing.
The work of my Angel, my Angel who has fallen
Firery halo, I get weak, then I'm calling.
Bottles and weed, a black to soothe the thoughts
I am already happy, But I need to do and be with something that would keep me off my knee's
A life I choose to keep me at peace when I feel like nobody loves me
Or is it just me?
When will I become free?
Addicted to you and me
Into my own mind, some crooked thoughts, and my own body.
The spliff is killing my eyes, shutting down every inch of my body.
"But you like to party."
Disrespecting Gods body
Forgive me, Lord, but this depression is acting naughty, and I have to kill It.
But now I am addicted. 
Now my whole world shifted. 
On a full train with the same gifted 
We especially high headed to a place where half-baked lives. 
I'm cooked out, and I want out. 
Please tell me where my escape is
This is all killing me, and nobody knows it.
I might overdose 

~I'M Addicted

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 7/21/2013 8:02:00 PM
You've executed this one well also. Good job.
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Malcolm Brooks
Date: 7/22/2013 1:20:00 PM
Thank You, I Really Appreciate it :)
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