Eve Roper Poet Verse

Addicted Beyond Crazy

shuddering
      feverish excitement
         round and round
            my woozy head
               as soft lips assault 

   will not  
      say no
         cunning fingers

   awake
      pearl’s  
         reverberate frail tide

   oh, so gently  
      sensual pleasure;
         addicted beyond crazy

 

9/16/2020

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Paul Callus September 22, 2020 at 1:49 PM This is so sensuous and sensual, Eve! The pleasure of addiction is not to be denied. Hugs // paul

V. Deepa September 17, 2020 at 12:19 PM Wow..such a stunning sensual write dear Eve mam.. Enjoyed the pattern of line flow.. Keep writing..and keep inspiring..Take care.Much love..:-)

Gregory Richard Barden September 17, 2020 at 5:17 AM Oh, this is my kind of passion and wild abandon - I just love this one, Eve ... more in this vein, if you please! (Headed to my faves) Superb write, my friend! :o) <3

Sam Kauffman September 16, 2020 at 4:04 PM What a tender addiction - love, Eve. A beautifully shared experience of being romanced!

Victor Buhagiar September 16, 2020 at 11:50 AM Addicted to love. Exciting poem. ~~

Carolyn Devonshire September 16, 2020 at 10:51 AM A lover with a "gentle" quality is what many women seek, Eve. And surely, intimacy can be addictive. Nicely done!

Daniel Turner September 16, 2020 at 10:19 AM Can you see me blushing? A very sensuous write, Eve. "Addicted to sensual pleasure" Who isn't?

Tom Cunningham September 16, 2020 at 10:04 AM A very sensual write Eve, hope youre well, greetings from a hot Turkey, I'll be shivering when I get back. Tom