Addicted

My mind is going crazy.
Everything is looking hazy.
When I get "A Taste of Nature."
Yes, That's Her Nickname "A Taste of Nature"
I'm addicted To her lips.
With Mary Jane, she lays on me a soft kiss.
Hunted by a great feeling, that has me feeling like I need more.
A troubled mind
It's my healing 
Please put me in a straightjacket to prevent me from my bad habits. 
It's like weights on my feet, and I'm at the bottom of the pool trying to speak.
Who am I living for?
Am I living for me? or having these addictions overpower me making me weak
For A moment, I get stronger.
Praying for God to stay with me just a little bit longer 
But she said she would always be down and don't forever sound much more longer.
"Come lay with me."
It feels good
But she is making me sick.
I wouldn't say I like this feeling, but she is here for my feelings and when I want to forget.
It's a love and hate battle.
A day and night hassle 
Into a fiery furnace or a beautiful castle
I am addicted
I know what should the end be
I'm just being stupid and letting her love me. 
When she away from me 
I can feel her touch me.
I'm addicted
But tonight, I'm breaking the chain.
All of my addictions are all in my brain.
I just gave it gender and a cute name. 
Call it growing pains because I'm struggling.
But it is time to grow.
They say I'm all talk.
So Shhhhhhhhhhh...

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August 17, 2013 at 10:43 PM
Hi Malcom, CONGRATULATIONS on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~SKAT~
Brooks Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 3:07 PM
Thank you :)
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August 17, 2013 at 9:47 PM
Malcom, stopping to read this one once again.... Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA
Brooks Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 3:08 PM
thank you :)
Hamilton Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 5:54 AM
good pen well describing addiction congrats on being featured Shadow x smiles
Brooks Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 3:08 PM
Thank you :)
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July 30, 2013 at 1:34 AM
Malcolm, There is one addiction you can never really give up and that is girls/women, they are a big turn on, and you just know you love them women are a drug I recommend, they may scramble your brain and drive you crazy as other drugs do, but women are really good for you and make you feel so good, so have a large dose of them. Very good poem. John
Brooks Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 7:42 PM
- Thank you for your visit and comments John - welcome back whenever you want!
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July 22, 2013 at 9:49 PM
you are right Malcolm, the addiction is only mind deep... don't let it take over. , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Brooks Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 7:43 PM
- Thank you for your visit and comments - welcome back whenever you want!
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July 22, 2013 at 9:26 PM
Hi Malcolm, i know about addiction. I love it when i can break free from it. your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT *
Brooks Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 7:45 PM
- Thank you for your visit and comments- welcome back whenever you want!
Wright Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 7:57 PM
I like this I wish everyone around me can at least get the hint have something such as this expire them. They look at me as the square lol so nicely done.
Brooks Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 1:22 PM
lol yea i could be looked at a square by judgment of not knowing me and just looking at me but when you know me a different story ..
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July 21, 2013 at 5:29 AM
- Hello new member: Malcolm - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - It's nice to be able to read your first poem. - You write very well, I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Brooks Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 1:22 PM
Thank You, I Really Appreciate it :)
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