Addicted

Take my 1st cut
I'm addicted
Crimson lines
Now I'm restricted
Sharpened razors
Now I'm ready
Close your eyes hold it steady
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Foulk Avatar
August 27, 2008 at 3:54 PM
I agree with what Michael said in everyway. there is better ways to do things. to write how we feel is a good step to start. the other is to believe on Jesus and accept him as your Savior. thank you for reading my poetry and for your comment. and I am 65 years old to the answer to your question.
Jordan Avatar
August 27, 2008 at 12:47 PM
I pose this question - Do you wish to learn how to constructively process your pain - What psychical and psychological relief do you experience while cutting and have you ever thought of handling things another way - Do you believe in God and do you believe that life has more to offer
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August 27, 2008 at 12:40 PM
This is an area that I have crossed paths with several times in the last couple of years - I don't really understand this but the addiction part I fully comprehend - I feel it is always important to write out our feelings for it saved me - To ever achieve gain we must first seek it God bless
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