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Adam the Dysfunctional

Adam had no parents, no uncles and no aunts. Psychologists would have given him not the slightest chance. Dysfunctional from the beginning; no siblings in his life, Perhaps that’s the reason he gave a rib for a wife. Eve was a good spouse, excepting forbidden fruit, Then, she and poor old Adam were given the Royal boot! Thorns outside the garden caused Adam to complain. When Eve felt the pain of birthing, she started raising Cain. All their troubles started when the Serpent told Eve a fib, Or was it when our dear Adam first gave up a rib?

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Date: 7/21/2015 11:04:00 AM
I love the word play in this humorous tale of Adam and Eve. Although I don't think it was so much of Adam giving up a rib as it was God taking a rib. I enjoyed this fun write! Love, Kim
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James Tate
Date: 7/21/2015 4:38:00 PM
Thanks Kim. World's shortest poem- (Fleas) Adam had'em [Auth unk]
Date: 1/27/2011 12:38:00 AM
so true, and a great description in every sense
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Date: 1/4/2011 8:01:00 AM
Well, actually God told Adam not Eve what not to do..The only information that Eve had was secondhand from Adam..The fall would not had happened if Adam told Eve, "Honey we are not suppose to eat that and I will not eat it.."...Good work enjoyed reading your interpertation of God's Word..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Your presence at my work brightened my gray morn..Sara
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Date: 12/1/2010 9:50:00 AM
Hi James,Good one! thanks for the comment on mine. most of my poetry is Bible based. I see you have a good knowledge too
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Date: 11/30/2010 4:22:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your thoughts this morning James. I have put my thinking cap on. Please keep sharing your poetry with us. Love Carol
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