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Ad For a Siren 1 and 2

----Ad for a Siren---- job hunting siren swims from cove to cove-- shark bosses need not apply **Sept.16, 2010 Siren, send my check in the mail ;) ----Ad for a Siren 2---- tired of zim dollars, siren's on the prowl~ oops wrong habitat **King Triton must be** thirty to forty-five-- loaded with laughter ;) must pass through Sunlight first-- stingrays need not apply Ms. Siren -- sorry no more ham sandwich, I ate it all, sorry this is the best I could do on a full stomach *burp*

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De R

Date: 2/29/2012 9:44:00 AM

I'm not sure I got this, nikko....well, I got the ham sandwich part cause I'm hungry! ;)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/8/2010 7:29:00 PM

lol,, Nikko, Ths one is amazing in a fun way to say i'm full! By the way 'zim' is dollars, asking for a funny reason. I was wondering what this poem is about. Have a nice one Nikko,..p.d.

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 10/8/2010 2:39:00 PM

haha uery funny Nikko,its so nice to be reading you here. .and hey you are my new fav poet too,hugs Celene :)

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 10/6/2010 5:11:00 PM

This is absurdist humor, but it is funny in a bizarre way. Offbeat , but interesting. Best wishes to you, Regards, Gerard

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2010 9:14:00 PM

Not sure I get these, NIkko. But that last one is really cute. Is the 30 to 45 a reference to her age? Let me seeif there was a part one? luv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/4/2010 11:07:00 AM

From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Nikko. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/4/2010 5:11:00 AM

strange write, yet humorous!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/4/2010 5:10:00 AM

very interesting write, enjoyed it, Nikko

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/4/2010 4:46:00 AM

Interesting write..Sara

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/4/2010 4:18:00 AM

Hi Nikko! Hope you are having a nice start of the week! How is your Mom? Thank you for your kind comment on "Summer like it once was". Enjoyed the read of your Senryus today! Ingat!...Gert

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/4/2010 3:53:00 AM

you too are crazy :p see now you are the one who needs to catch up on sleep! what certificate are you talking about?? (see I am half asleep now, no joke) I'm pulling my face in hopes to stop crying-- ;) you told me to stop blubbering--oopsy got to go-- dinner awaits me haha

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/4/2010 3:39:00 AM

I'm soo not crazy!! Didn't you get the certificate I faxed to you? *confused* err what's with the pulling faces thing? :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/4/2010 3:28:00 AM

fine >,< .... I'll just bare my claws now...kidding btw thank you to Anthony for commenting here too :) glad you found it interesting...thanks for bearing with my craziness, as well as the Siren's...

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/4/2010 3:18:00 AM

Stop blubbering then :) hehe *p

Anthony Nutter

Date: 10/4/2010 3:08:00 AM

Interesting write, enjoyable read.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/4/2010 3:06:00 AM

omg!! geeee-- you are just like Chris!! O_o --making me look silly, changing your typos like that!! I'm blubbering now-- boohoo ;p

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/4/2010 3:02:00 AM

What are you on about Missy??? Are your eyes deceiving you due to a lack of sleep? ;) lol, sorry I could not help myself.. Payment coming up, just not sure in what currency :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/4/2010 2:54:00 AM

sorry Wilma, I promised that?? I don't remember?? -- you sure are swimming too hard-- your sandwich turned into "sandwish"-- hmmm but I actually love that-- a SandWish--way too cool-- glad you loved it Siren, now if only King Triton would pop up already...

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/4/2010 2:48:00 AM

NIKKO!! You are absolutely insane hehe, but in a good way lol.. Enjoyed your madness while working..Ps: I've still got you in the eye for the sandwich your promised :) Love it!!