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You're the air that I breathe
The calm to my seethe

You're the love that I hate
The one perfect mate

You're the way that I move
I walk in your groove

You're the pill that I take
With all that's at stake

You're the love of my life
Though you fill me with strife

You're the cloud in my rain
Confusing my brain

You're the hue in my clothes
So that everyone knows

You're the hunch in my back
It keeps me on track

You're the word on my lips
The sway of my hips

You're the way that I live
Though it's hard to forgive

You'll be the way I go
For I love you so
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 12, 2016 at 11:33 AM
Tianna Anhorn, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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November 12, 2010 at 3:59 PM
Congratulations on your coming forward into second round....Sara
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November 10, 2010 at 8:54 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Tianna. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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August 5, 2010 at 9:57 PM
kool luv it
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August 5, 2010 at 9:32 PM
Congratulations for your being featured this week. Love, iolanda
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August 5, 2010 at 5:05 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Enjoy the honour. Love always, Adeleke
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August 3, 2010 at 6:39 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Tianna. Love, Carol
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