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You're the air that I breathe The calm to my seethe You're the love that I hate The one perfect mate You're the way that I move I walk in your groove You're the pill that I take With all that's at stake You're the love of my life Though you fill me with strife You're the cloud in my rain Confusing my brain You're the hue in my clothes So that everyone knows You're the hunch in my back It keeps me on track You're the word on my lips The sway of my hips You're the way that I live Though it's hard to forgive You'll be the way I go For I love you so

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/12/2016 11:33:00 AM
Tianna Anhorn, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 11/12/2010 3:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your coming forward into second round....Sara
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Date: 11/10/2010 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Tianna. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/5/2010 9:57:00 PM
kool luv it
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Date: 8/5/2010 9:32:00 PM
Congratulations for your being featured this week. Love, iolanda
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Date: 8/5/2010 5:05:00 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Enjoy the honour. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 8/3/2010 6:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Tianna. Love, Carol
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