Active Inaction

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Active inaction, bliss thunder At play, within our form Liquid light, luminous wonder Divine magnetism warm Soma nectar dripping Heart elixir sipping Rapture, oh so gripping Deep meditation Active inaction 22-October-2021 Quietus

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/23/2021 2:03:00 AM

There is so much delicacy to this one.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/23/2021 6:42:00 AM

It represents actuality of being without metaphor

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/22/2021 5:58:00 AM

Wonderful verse. God bless you always. Love, Gina

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/22/2021 6:39:00 AM

Thank you, Gina!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/22/2021 1:23:00 AM

I have never seen such a poem. Opposites makes one think.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/22/2021 1:46:00 AM

I think you’ve missed the point!

Mike Bayles

Date: 10/21/2021 8:26:00 PM

There's a quiet passion to this poem. It makes me want to meditate, always a wonderful thing to do.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/21/2021 10:01:00 PM