Notes About The Poem

Actions Speak Louder Than Words

Actions please us deeper than just words-
though teasers talk up promises so made
with words that sound like songs of pretty birds;
the music's sweet, but sours when pledges fade.

Words flow smoothly, soothing heart and mind
with hopeful thoughts that all too soon escape.
These words that tease are truly not inclined
to fill those hopes that never will take shape.

Actions do please deeper- words just tease
to simply stoke a fire that's never lit.
Just empty words for vows that float away-
from shallow talkers who will not commit.

So disappointed when words stand alone-
that only tease with promises not met-
to then accept the letdown we bemoan
by sham neglect- the sad result we get.


July 19, 2016

Contest: Motto Matters
Sponsor: Natasha L Scragg
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Note:
The origin of this phrase in its earliest known 
appearance (with the exact wording it has today)
is in a work called the Melancholy State of Province,
1736: “Actions speak louder than words and are 
more to be regarded.”
However, the idea of this phrase goes back even 
further. For example, Michel de Montaigne, who 
lived during the 1500s, expressed the following 
in one of the essays he wrote:
“Saying is a different thing from doing.”
Reference: google.com
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Scragg Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 9:49 AM
Dear Sandra. Thank you for entering the contest and congratulations on your placement! A very thought provoking piece. Actions will always carry greater weight than words. Thank you for these reminders. All the best.
Scars Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 2:26 PM
Sandra, a wonderful poem and my fave from all the entries..congrats on your placement lovely sweet Sandra! :)-luloo
Chansarkar Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 8:30 AM
A great idiom with a beautiful poem,congratulations Sandra!
Haight Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Thank you very much, Sara. Hugs, Sandra
Day Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 7:50 AM
I am always attracted to sonnets and this piece was written to form – very nice! I found your idiom good but some others were stronger – yours was a bit more literal. Otherwise, I would have placed it higher! Anyway, congrats on your high placement in the Create an Idiom contest!
Haight Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Thank you so much, Jesse, for your positive comments on my Sonnet, and for the placement. I am so thrilled just to be on the short list of winners in your Premiere Contest. Hugs, Sandra
Shanmugam Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 10:11 AM
Well written sandra:) goodluck
Haight Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 7:17 PM
Thank you so much, Madhupriya. I always appreciate your visits and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Daniel Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 1:20 AM
A nice one Sandra:) I don't understand this contest.. you've perfectly created a nice idiom:)
Haight Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 7:15 PM
Thank you for your supportive comment, Jo. Good luck on coming up with a good idiom! Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 8:15 PM
A splendid entry for his contest Sandra. An idiom I adhere to and one my husband also follows! 7 ; ) this should do well!
Haight Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 6:57 PM
Thanks once again, Connie. I appreciate the nice rating and yourencouraging comments. Hugs, Sandra
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