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Actions please us deeper than just words- though teasers talk up promises so made with words that sound like songs of pretty birds; the music's sweet, but sours when pledges fade. Words flow smoothly, soothing heart and mind with hopeful thoughts that all too soon escape. These words that tease are truly not inclined to fill those hopes that never will take shape. Actions do please deeper- words just tease to simply stoke a fire that's never lit. Just empty words for vows that float away- from shallow talkers who will not commit. So disappointed when words stand alone- that only tease with promises not met- to then accept the letdown we bemoan by sham neglect- the sad result we get. July 19, 2016 Contest: Motto Matters Sponsor: Natasha L Scragg --------------------------------------------------- Note: The origin of this phrase in its earliest known appearance (with the exact wording it has today) is in a work called the Melancholy State of Province, 1736: “Actions speak louder than words and are more to be regarded.” However, the idea of this phrase goes back even further. For example, Michel de Montaigne, who lived during the 1500s, expressed the following in one of the essays he wrote: “Saying is a different thing from doing.” Reference: google.com

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Date: 9/30/2021 9:49:00 AM
Dear Sandra. Thank you for entering the contest and congratulations on your placement! A very thought provoking piece. Actions will always carry greater weight than words. Thank you for these reminders. All the best.
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Date: 8/3/2016 2:26:00 PM
Sandra, a wonderful poem and my fave from all the entries..congrats on your placement lovely sweet Sandra! :)-luloo
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Date: 8/3/2016 8:30:00 AM
A great idiom with a beautiful poem,congratulations Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/3/2016 8:57:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sara. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/3/2016 7:50:00 AM
I am always attracted to sonnets and this piece was written to form – very nice! I found your idiom good but some others were stronger – yours was a bit more literal. Otherwise, I would have placed it higher! Anyway, congrats on your high placement in the Create an Idiom contest!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/3/2016 8:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jesse, for your positive comments on my Sonnet, and for the placement. I am so thrilled just to be on the short list of winners in your Premiere Contest. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/20/2016 10:11:00 AM
Well written sandra:) goodluck
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/20/2016 7:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Madhupriya. I always appreciate your visits and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/20/2016 1:20:00 AM
A nice one Sandra:) I don't understand this contest.. you've perfectly created a nice idiom:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/20/2016 7:15:00 PM
Thank you for your supportive comment, Jo. Good luck on coming up with a good idiom! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/19/2016 8:15:00 PM
A splendid entry for his contest Sandra. An idiom I adhere to and one my husband also follows! 7 ; ) this should do well!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/20/2016 6:57:00 PM
Thanks once again, Connie. I appreciate the nice rating and yourencouraging comments. Hugs, Sandra

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