Acrostic For Carol Brown

Time honored functions
Has been tried and perfected
Even the animals know the ways of the birds and the bees

Best with much strutting and songs
Increase the anticipation of love
Regally displayed emotions
Drape the natural colors and
Songs on my heart strings

Advance passionately
New gifts arouse the pleasure
Drawn against his manly charms

To
Hear
Exclamation points!!

Buzzing around in my head
Energeticly
Enticing
Sexuality
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Eggins Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 12:44 AM
the birds and the bees nicely done Doris Smile ... love Jayne x x x
Freeman Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 7:33 PM
Capricorn! That's what I am Doris December the 23th, two day before Christmas. Capricorns, as I have aways noticed, have their own agenda. They are never compelled to go with the flow. They are like the Salmon, always swimming against the flow. The power of reproduction is at the head of the stream. Agape, Moses
Freeman Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 6:43 PM
I didn't see any junk, and since you said it was , I looked really hard. Sorry Charlie!! I don't like to hear my sister say things like that about her beautiful heavenenly gift.. Say the beauty you want, and imagine it is so and in Love it will come to pass.Smile, Agape, Moses
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August 9, 2010 at 6:30 PM
Thank you, Doris. And I enjoyed this. I think only a woman could have written these lines. I like verse 2 a lot. Advance passionately...is the outstanding moment in this poem. This poem gets better and ends strong. I admire that in any poem. Thank you, Gerard.
Strand Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 1:35 AM
very original writing Doris.Rgds Brian
Anish Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 2:15 PM
Your poem is alluring because of what is implied.
Knop Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 5:28 AM
Soup Mail, Doris! Thank you for your ongoing comments and have a nice Sunday! Here it is raining cats and dogs today!!!....Gert...Just to add to C.L.'s comment: The Czech people and theRussians for example eat more cabbage than the Germans...Hahaha!!!
Henderson Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 3:46 PM
soup mail waiting, Charles
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 3:37 PM
Hey D. you got soup mail
Kendrick Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 3:32 PM
Great write that should do well in the contest...Good luck..Thanks for the comments..Mom
Falotico Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 3:22 PM
Great entry for contest... best of luck... a winner!! luv Michael
Sweetheart Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 2:34 PM
Really good one Doris..good luck in Carol's contest.. will put u on my Church prayer chain right now for healing and speedly recovery.. drink lots of water to defer any infection and cranberry juice if not too harsh for your throat area...luv.. prayer produces miracles ..luv..
Devonshire Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 12:42 PM
Ah, the dance of seduction and passion. So well written, Doris. Best of luck in Carol's contest. Love, Carolyn
Neels Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 12:33 PM
Interesting Acrostic on the birds and the bees Doris, you sure get your message across excellently.. Enjoy your weekend and best wishes for Carol's contest.. Wilma
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 12:23 PM
Beautiful poem D. If you read the title of my poem I have changed it. may be you will get it now
Ah Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 11:52 AM
Hahah love it!
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