Across the Line My Version

in this sandsea
of darkness
lieing with a pain across his cheast
pretending he is heartless
as a fire flashes from the sky
he was fragile
and frozen
when paranioa took away his friend
and now he is somehow more broken

he is the waiting for the end of his demise
holding onto all of his goodbyes
holding his fate across the line

slowly
breaking
lieing with a pain across her chest
she wakes with her craving
as the fire burns her eye
she was fragile
and frozen
when deaths grip took away her friend
and now shes somehow more broken

she is waiting for the end of her demise 
holding onto all of her goodbyes
holding death across the line

*this is a song by linkin park off the underground album but i did alter it somewhat i 
did not create the song only changed some of the lyrics*
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June 15, 2011 at 11:34 AM
We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today Dennis. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol
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