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why why why does the room spin ever so slow? what what what does this pattern of colors mean? muted… fading… gone why are the stars all just right out of reach? and why are you tangibly close, yet so far? here… now… I’m shrouded in darkness with no chance at all for light here… here… in the dark ————— for the Gymnopedie No 1 Poetry Contest sponsored by Craig Cornish written on 07/23/2022 Link to gymnopedie: https://youtu.be/S-Xm7s9eGxU

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Date: 7/25/2022 5:43:00 AM
Pensive penning, Jeff, much enjoyed my friend, Aloha~William
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/25/2022 6:29:00 AM
Thanks, William, - definitely not in my "comfort zone", lol.
Date: 7/24/2022 3:57:00 AM
Wow. Just love this. Hope you win. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/24/2022 4:14:00 AM
Thanks, Gina. That's an unusual song Craig linked to. Can't say I'd ever listened to it before.

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