Acorns

Bang! The acorns fall Bouncing off things at a speed Rolling in the weeds Heidi Sands 9/26/17

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/20/2017 8:16:00 AM

Ohh what an awesome Haiku this is Heidi. I enjoyed this fantastic write very much!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/20/2017 8:34:00 AM

Thanks so much Susan! I appreciate your visit and happy you enjoyed this :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/27/2017 4:36:00 AM

Ha! I know what you mean! We used to have a walnut tree nearby that would drop walnuts on cars that were parked under it! Thank goodness they are surrounded by a soft outer shell when they fall! I surely loved reading your amazing poem here this morning! You have delighted me by your terrific Haiku, Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/27/2017 6:14:00 AM

Thank you Russell. Oh, I didn't think of walnuts too!

Frederic Parker

Date: 9/26/2017 6:50:00 PM

duck! those things hurt...

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/26/2017 6:53:00 PM

Exactly! They come down like bullets...bouncing off a metal roof too :)