Acorns

Bang!  The acorns fall
    Bouncing off things at a speed
            Rolling in the weeds

Heidi Sands

9/26/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ashley Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 8:16 AM
Ohh what an awesome Haiku this is Heidi. I enjoyed this fantastic write very much!
Sands Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 8:34 AM
Thanks so much Susan! I appreciate your visit and happy you enjoyed this :)
Sivey Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 4:36 AM
Ha! I know what you mean! We used to have a walnut tree nearby that would drop walnuts on cars that were parked under it! Thank goodness they are surrounded by a soft outer shell when they fall! I surely loved reading your amazing poem here this morning! You have delighted me by your terrific Haiku, Great Work!!
Sands Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:14 AM
Thank you Russell. Oh, I didn't think of walnuts too!
Parker Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 6:50 PM
duck! those things hurt...
Sands Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 6:53 PM
Exactly! They come down like bullets...bouncing off a metal roof too :)
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