Jenish Somadas Poet Rhyme

Acid Tears

Under the passing smile he nourished his monstrous collusion
Plunder the face, while my shattered mirror fallen in confusion
Hunter shammed in the veil of love, pursued the pleasure of delusion
Thunder struck into a litter pile, driven me to a life in seclusion
Wonder how the hostile acid, deformed my face into exclusion
Sunder my life into an isle, the immense vacuity of illusion.



Third Place in Triple Rhyme Poetry Contest sponsored by Beth Evans

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Aditi Mishra July 16, 2020 at 9:00 AM Your muse is really touching Jenish. This is such a powerful tale of sadness and strength. Loved the reference from the real incident portrayed in the movie. Numerous barbaric stories have been narrated in a nutshell. Congratulations on your win my friend. Blessings :) Jenish Somadas July 18, 2020 at 11:35 PM Thank you Aditi for your support.. Yes, it is a sad story.. Unfortunately the story is still continuing in different places..

James Inman July 13, 2020 at 7:35 PM A very well written yet sad piece Jenish. Wonderful wording throughout and your end rhymes were especially good. Jenish Somadas July 13, 2020 at 11:48 PM Thank you James for your delightful word.. Have a great day..

William Kelii Kekaula July 12, 2020 at 3:34 AM Visually illuminating, Jenish, your awe-inspiring vocabulary was expressly well-done and my compliments in your placement, my friend -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William Jenish Somadas July 12, 2020 at 4:30 AM Thank you William for your support.. Have a great day..

Eric Cohen July 11, 2020 at 5:10 PM Very moving and powerful. I imagine not easy to write (in several respects). Best to you, Jenish. Jenish Somadas July 11, 2020 at 11:35 PM Thank you Eric for your kind support.. Have a great day..

Andrea Dietrich July 11, 2020 at 1:56 PM Congrats for your win, Jenish. such a sad story in this one. Jenish Somadas July 11, 2020 at 11:34 PM Thank you Andrea..

Janice Canerdy July 11, 2020 at 8:57 AM CONGRATS on your win with this well-written poem, Jenish! Sad, shocking story! Janice Jenish Somadas July 11, 2020 at 11:33 PM Thank you Janice.. Yes, it is sad to know that it is still happening around..

Jenna Logan July 11, 2020 at 8:34 AM I'm pleased to see this one being honored in the contest. Congratulations, Jenish. Jenish Somadas July 11, 2020 at 11:32 PM Thank you Jenna.. I'm delighted reading your words...

Jenna Logan June 30, 2020 at 2:47 PM That's just heartbreaking. I would hope it made her more beautiful inside. Jenish Somadas June 30, 2020 at 11:47 PM Yes, it is heartbreaking.. Thank you Jenna.. Have a great day..

Demetrios Trifiatis June 30, 2020 at 7:03 AM A tragic event of the kind took place in Greece last month when a thirty-five-year-old woman attacked viciously with acid a thirty-four- year- old young lady. Your poetic ardor has managed to obliterate the ugliness of the act with poetic beauty dearest, Jenish! Hugs xxx Jenish Somadas June 30, 2020 at 11:46 PM Yes.. Demetrios.. It is happening in different places.. These types of attacks are giving the victims pain for a life long.. How sadist some minds are!!

Winged Warrior June 30, 2020 at 3:39 AM Nicely done my friend...great entry Jenish...best of luck...^WW^ :o) Jenish Somadas June 30, 2020 at 11:41 PM Thank you Winged Warrior..

Shirley Hawkins June 30, 2020 at 12:52 AM Very deep poem Jenish. The world has become a very frightening place, too much unnecessary hatred ... Take care...Shirley Jenish Somadas June 30, 2020 at 11:40 PM Thank you Shirley.. A great share of acid cases are 'love' related.. Interesting.. rejection of love leading to hatred..

Gershon Wolf June 29, 2020 at 7:18 PM 'Acid tears' - gruesome stuff. Gotta agree with Tom below. Stay sane, Gershon Jenish Somadas June 29, 2020 at 11:38 PM Yes.. Gruesome..In this world when good increases, evil will also rise..

Tom Cunningham June 29, 2020 at 6:46 AM Well written Jenish, those evil scum who carry out those wicked attacks should be hung. They might as well have killed the victim because they have ruined their lives Tom Jenish Somadas June 29, 2020 at 11:37 PM You said it Tom.. I support you fully.. Those devils should be treated as murderers..

Vijay Pandit June 29, 2020 at 6:44 AM Those two faces tell the horror story--you gave them a voice, Jenish..all the best. Jenish Somadas June 29, 2020 at 11:36 PM Thank you Vijay for the kind support..