Acid Rain

You're toxic you
Burn like acid rain
You're toxic radiating
So much pain

Would it be wrong
do you think?
To put some arsenic
In your drink

To go and get
Some rope if ya will
And practice my 
My knotting skills

To go out and buy
A shiney forty-five
Be in your face 
And put if between your eyes

Your toxic you 
Burn like acid rain
Your toxic radiating 
So much pain

Your toxic you
Burn like acid rain
Your so f--king toxic
You make me insane
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 21, 2016 at 9:20 AM
Kathryn, nice to see this one again...skat
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July 10, 2013 at 9:03 AM
Kathryn , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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July 10, 2013 at 8:43 AM
Kathryn -Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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July 10, 2013 at 4:05 AM
- Hi Kathryn, a well written poem. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)
Lewis Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 6:04 PM
I really liked this poem... It was ziesty and had a kind of hate to it. (: My name is Kenzie. Welcome to the soup.
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