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Acid Rain

You're toxic you Burn like acid rain You're toxic radiating So much pain Would it be wrong do you think? To put some arsenic In your drink To go and get Some rope if ya will And practice my My knotting skills To go out and buy A shiney forty-five Be in your face And put if between your eyes Your toxic you Burn like acid rain Your toxic radiating So much pain Your toxic you Burn like acid rain Your so f--king toxic You make me insane

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/21/2016 9:20:00 AM
Kathryn, nice to see this one again...skat
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Date: 7/10/2013 9:03:00 AM
Kathryn , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/10/2013 8:43:00 AM
Kathryn -Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 7/10/2013 4:05:00 AM
- Hi Kathryn, a well written poem. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/9/2013 6:04:00 PM
I really liked this poem... It was ziesty and had a kind of hate to it. (: My name is Kenzie. Welcome to the soup.
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