Brian Davey Poet Couplet

Acid Pain

Acid Pain




       Keeled over ripe with      p a i n      returns my       a c i d    r a i n
                  Toxicity within my       b r a i n      will I ever sleep       a g a i n

       Enter body     s h a k e s     eyes asleep wide      a w a k e
                  More I just can’t     t a k e     internal life      e a r t h   q u a k e

       Echo walled in      s c r e a m s      nightmares fill my       d r e a m s
                  Desperation is my       t  h e m e       sanity splits at the      s e a m s

       Agonizing tortured        m i n d        peace to never        f i n d
                  Hardwires begin to       u n w i n d        blood shot burning      b l i n d

       Paranoid frantic       B e i n g       life is not worth what it’s       s e e i n g
                  Events teaching        d e c e i v i n g        it is “The End” I’m       l e a v i n g



                                                                       
                                                                      bmdavey@10/24/17

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Andrea Dietrich October 29, 2017 at 6:50 PM I'm glad all is well now. Yeah, things do not come out as we see them on our files when we go to put them at soup. your word Leaving is still divided. Wish I had time to search for another poem of yours but I have much to do in my kitchen now. Good night and have a great Monday. Brian Davey October 30, 2017 at 1:29 AM Thank you for taking the time to stop in and visit it is always a pleasure my friend! You also have a great Monday if that's at all possible! Lol

Andrea Dietrich October 26, 2017 at 8:27 PM Hey, Brian, I really like the internal rhyme you were showcasing here. To let you know, you should view the poem from my end and see that the last two parts of this are cutting off and going onto wrong lines. You can edit so it won't do that. I enjoyed this one. Noticed from your poetry page that you were gone a spell in the summer. I hope it was just for vacation and nothing bad!! Brian Davey October 27, 2017 at 12:52 AM That's weird bedside it doesn't show my lines wrapping around on my tablet so I figured it would be the same for everyone? Thanks again for the insight and I was on vacation and then had to take some time off for a family matter but all is well