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Acid Love

We can't tell whom we love Even if someone who chase you Seems perfect for your choosing The heart can never be dictated It's unpredictable when love hit you It can never tell when and where The heart fall for someone else One thing for sure it can never tell It can strike to fall without warning The moment someone barge into Your mind during your time of sleep That's one clue your heart sense Start beating uncontrollably mean Often if you're busy you think of her In you're free time you think of her You're cautious when seeing her Everything around seems topsy-turvy In her presence or even thinking her In all of these the heart is happy This is what I mean to fall in love.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/10/2025 11:44:00 AM

Hello Hugo, I believe this to be true. I hope all is fine with you. Much love here. /Darlene/

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 7/13/2025 9:23:00 PM

My apology for an overdue reply, Darlene. Getting older is a health risky. Anyway, thank you for your comment. We're in the same page of understanding this poem. Hope you're in the best of pink health. Love you here, Darlene./Hugo.

Jacqueline R. Mendoza

Date: 6/6/2025 9:53:00 PM

I'm so sorry for that previous comment but I'm happy I made u laugh. I hope u won't dislike me u see that's my problem I'm blunt bcoz I'm not scared to anyone only with God, or Eternal God. He knows everything and to let u know I am a pro-choice because I understand the ladies u know, it's not their fault. Thank u for understanding me.

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 6/6/2025 10:26:00 PM

Well receive. No worries, being frank is you're true to yourself. When I like a person, I accept who really is, irregardless of ideosyncracies. Have a care for yourself, Jacq.

Jacqueline R. Mendoza

Date: 6/6/2025 9:15:00 PM

Hugo, I'm sorry there's no reply underneath ur name so I have to check out ur poem and comment on it. Acid love, I remember when I was younger there's my crush now that I got older it all changed. I don't like a small down there u know, I'm fed up with it, I had 2 bfs the 1st one after my tragic car accident was not circumscized O my God, the 2nd after my car accident was circumscized but it's really small like 4 inches. I am sorry if I'm very blunt. There's more I want to tell u.

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 6/6/2025 9:44:00 PM

You're so blunt and funny, Jacq. Whether your ex bfs is circumcized or not the real issue is, is there love on that sex. If it's experimental or lust only that's really funny experience. Anyway, thanks Jacq for your hilarious comment.