Hugo Sarvida Jr. Poet Narrative

Acid Love

We can't tell whom we love
Even if someone who chase you
Seems perfect for your choosing
The heart can never be dictated
It's unpredictable when love hit you
It can never tell when and where
The heart fall for someone else
One thing for sure it can never tell
It can strike to fall without warning
The moment someone barge into
Your mind during your time of sleep
That's one clue your heart sense
Start beating uncontrollably mean
Often if you're busy you think of her
In you're free time you think of her
You're cautious when seeing her
Everything around seems topsy-turvy
In her presence or even thinking her
In all of these the heart is happy
This is what I mean to fall in love.

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Darlene De Beaulieu June 10, 2025 at 11:44 AM Hello Hugo, I believe this to be true. I hope all is fine with you. Much love here. /Darlene/ Hugo Sarvida Jr. July 13, 2025 at 9:23 PM My apology for an overdue reply, Darlene. Getting older is a health risky. Anyway, thank you for your comment. We're in the same page of understanding this poem. Hope you're in the best of pink health. Love you here, Darlene./Hugo.

Jacqueline R. Mendoza June 6, 2025 at 9:53 PM I'm so sorry for that previous comment but I'm happy I made u laugh. I hope u won't dislike me u see that's my problem I'm blunt bcoz I'm not scared to anyone only with God, or Eternal God. He knows everything and to let u know I am a pro-choice because I understand the ladies u know, it's not their fault. Thank u for understanding me. Hugo Sarvida Jr. June 6, 2025 at 10:26 PM Well receive. No worries, being frank is you're true to yourself. When I like a person, I accept who really is, irregardless of ideosyncracies. Have a care for yourself, Jacq.

Jacqueline R. Mendoza June 6, 2025 at 9:15 PM Hugo, I'm sorry there's no reply underneath ur name so I have to check out ur poem and comment on it. Acid love, I remember when I was younger there's my crush now that I got older it all changed. I don't like a small down there u know, I'm fed up with it, I had 2 bfs the 1st one after my tragic car accident was not circumscized O my God, the 2nd after my car accident was circumscized but it's really small like 4 inches. I am sorry if I'm very blunt. There's more I want to tell u. Hugo Sarvida Jr. June 6, 2025 at 9:44 PM You're so blunt and funny, Jacq. Whether your ex bfs is circumcized or not the real issue is, is there love on that sex. If it's experimental or lust only that's really funny experience. Anyway, thanks Jacq for your hilarious comment.