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Achoholism

when i sleep i fa into slumber then i awake with what seem seems to be the worst headache the walls cave in i need to satisy my hunger im in my own hell of demons no need for heaven somewhere theres a place for me between a world thats not forseen whats on my mind a terriable fate thats left behind when i sleep at night the walls creep in my demons insight though frightfully its a sin sometimes its just there i have to give in

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Date: 1/27/2016 3:12:00 PM
deep write...
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Date: 6/10/2011 1:14:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry on this subject today.. enjoy the site as u continue to share words with luv..
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Date: 6/10/2011 6:36:00 AM
Nice writing on Alchoholism
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Date: 6/10/2011 4:48:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Lisa. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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