Achoholism

when i sleep i fa into slumber
then i awake with what  seem 
seems to be  the worst headache
the walls cave in
i need to satisy my hunger
im in my own hell of demons
no need for heaven
somewhere theres a place for me between
a world thats not forseen
whats on my mind
a terriable fate thats left behind
when i sleep at night
the walls creep in my demons insight
though frightfully its a sin
sometimes its just there i have to give in
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Agustin Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 5:43 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 3:12 PM
deep write...
Sweetheart Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 1:14 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry on this subject today.. enjoy the site as u continue to share words with luv..
Mehta Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 6:36 AM
Nice writing on Alchoholism
Brown Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 4:48 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Lisa. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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