Aching Heart

Sitting here can't believe she don’t know,
Now I'm sitting here thinking where should I go,
She’s the only one for me, wonder if she knows that,
Trying my all, giving her the best that I got,
Guess it wasn’t good enough,
Time for me to get tough,
But she still in my mind,
All day all the time,
Is like ma heart in liquid nitrogen,
Now if she make a fist it’s going to break again,
Thinking about her makes it hurt even more,
If I get to be with her I'll love her for sure,
What's happening to me? What have she done?,
I've never seen myself like this that’s how I know she's the one,
I know everyone wants you,
But no one can treat you like I do,
Please just say yes to me,
And from there on forever we will be,
I'm trying to read that book in your head,
Trying to figure out if you love someone instead,
But I guess I'm not in the story,
And that right there makes me worry,
My heart beats for you like a solo play of a drum,
But if I'm not yours I know the drum performance is done,
Please I need you in my life,
Not only for you to be my wife,
But my lover, my friend,
Just for us to love each other till the end......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/11/2012 4:50:00 AM
A touching declaration of love - vulnerable yet not desperate.
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