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Achievements

Planning requires grit and devotion to succeed,
Does triumph make you shiver down your spine?
                           Propelling, freed
                            accomplishment

I fought with more pertinacity than bulldogs.
I cannot help but look at the success, 
Does insufficiency make you shiver?
Stigma does not end with lateness or quiver.

          Would night demise throw by a droop
           Of the early morning shimmer?

                   Dad geese the goal
                   setting the path

(Fragmented Verse)


02/25/21
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Silpika Kalita March 17, 2024 at 4:25 PM I always found depth in the subjects chosen by you. With such analysis it will make everyone to brood. The four lines towards the end of the fragmented verse has universal appeal. Regards