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Planning requires grit and devotion to succeed, Does triumph make you shiver down your spine? Propelling, freed accomplishment I fought with more pertinacity than bulldogs. I cannot help but look at the success, Does insufficiency make you shiver? Stigma does not end with lateness or quiver. Would night demise throw by a droop Of the early morning shimmer? Dad geese the goal setting the path (Fragmented Verse) 02/25/21 All The Little Pieces Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 3/17/2024 4:25:00 PM
I always found depth in the subjects chosen by you. With such analysis it will make everyone to brood. The four lines towards the end of the fragmented verse has universal appeal. Regards
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