Achievement

We have thought, in our hearts and minds, that our senior citizens are,
Meant for riding kids each day for each hour in their little toy car;
We feel that we feed them to ride our kids farthest or very far,
To reach them back like sky stars with no physical or psychic scar;
Father or mother... uncle or aunty... who can in this art par,
Are candidates selected to go to heaven with no age bar....!


02 December  2022 
BiteSize Poem no56 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kauffman Avatar
December 2, 2022 at 11:35 AM
Chris, a lovely tribute to those with many candles on their cake and no worries about setting off smoke alarms in their celebrations. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings.
Alex Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 10:59 PM
Thank you very much.
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