Aches and Pains

All you younger folk, take heed;
Here’s advice that you will need:
Every effort to keep fit –
Diet, gym class, all of it,
Will not help you as you age
From entering that “senior” stage.

Age alone is what explains
The bulk of many aches and pains.
Joints and muscles, all agree,
Arrive with Nature’s warranty, 
Which, we never comprehended,
Cannot really be extended. 

When we’re young we make mistakes,
Thinking all those pains and aches
Of older people we’ll avoid
Because precautions we’ve employed.
We view our elders with contempt;
From their distress we’ll be exempt.

This, then, is a wake-up shout.
There really isn’t any doubt
That even if you treat them right,
Your mind and body won’t be quite
The same as age controls the reins
And aches and pains are what remains.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 5:28 AM
Ilene, you are preaching to the choir here. I hope the choir is listening, even the songs are not the same. Everything changes so suddenly and abruptly. It makes you wish you had done EVERYTHING when you still could.
Cunningham Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 4:19 PM
Well written ilene, you're so right, getting old sucks big time.
Turner Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 3:20 PM
May as well embrace it! Telling it like it is, Ilene:)
Andresen Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 2:52 PM
- Things the youngsters do not think about at all - But, a lot of humor and laughter. ..... can prevent age changes, dear Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leffanta Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 1:05 PM
Well said! No doubt China is already producing samplers hot of the press! Aloha! Rico
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