Ache

Ache
I shake
In the light
I break
My need
It feeds 
Cut
I bleed
Im caught 
It grips
I slip
I stare
it drips
so red
i bled
lost 
in my head
cant stop shaking 
cant stop moving
cant stop thinking
cant stop losing
cant stop the motion
back and forth
its my devotion
offering what im worth
there is no emotion
only this curse
it builds 
and tightens
and grips
and whitens
welling up
it looks so right
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mister Roboto Avatar
April 24, 2011 at 3:00 AM
Yo! This one hits home. Gotta Hovie Blueprint flavor to it. YahMean? Joey
Brown Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 11:47 AM
The weekend is here and I am trying to get some poetry read. I am glad you had something new here for me to enjoy today Jeremy. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol
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