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Lawns luxuriant 
Drew sight of poor passersby
Barbed fence mocked when near!

Copyright Anulaxmi Nayak, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Callus Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 3:43 PM
Indeed a lovely senryu, Anulaxmi. I agree with what Stephen said:) In life there are many things that tempt us, but we are unable to partake from! ~ Was wondering what had become of you...your absence has not gone unnoticed. Regards // paul
Nayak Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 5:19 AM
Thank you Dear Paul Callus, I am glad you liked my write. Anu:)
Wilson-Floyd Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 3:12 PM
I like the sentiment in this poem. I feel that line one counts 6 syllables not 5. I would lose the "The" and it works fine.
Nayak Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 5:21 AM
Thank you Dear Stephen, yes i will correct the syllable count:) Anu:)
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