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The lawns luxuriant 
Drew sight of poor passersby
Barbed fence mocked when near!

Copyright Anulaxmi Nayak, 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 1/19/2018 3:12:00 PM
I like the sentiment in this poem. I feel that line one counts 6 syllables not 5. I would lose the "The" and it works fine.
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