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Accept the Tide

Though I hate to do the daily cleaning finding it quite demeaning
I love the smell and scent of pine, so I sweep while singing.

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Elizabeth Wesley

September 28, 2011 at 8:49 PM

Take a break Debbi, sit down and keep writing, it's more fun isn't it?!

Richard Pickett

September 28, 2011 at 9:24 AM

Pinesol Girl eh..lol I like this one Debbie... God Bless...Taz

Francine Roberts

September 27, 2011 at 8:23 PM

cute one, you have soup mail Debbie

Sheol Moribund

September 27, 2011 at 5:55 PM

Dear Debbie: I'm a guy, so doing house cleaning in a downer. It helps if I put on some good tunes, to make it a little less boring. Great poem!!! Thank you 4 reading and commenting on my poem. Have a day that is good and filled with the scent of pine.

Sara Kendrick

September 27, 2011 at 5:08 PM

Good couplet..I do enjoy the scent of pine that is true pine scent from the trees but that out of a bottle is a good substitute..Good luck if written for a contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara