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i wasn't there, that was my mistake i gave you my all you never did take it, I thought we had good chemistry when really i was your worst enemy it only took one blow before you go i need to know did you love me did we wast our time are you listening maybe i shouldn't speak my mind,if it makes you angry maybe i should learn how to speak,im just being me,you should have accepted me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/6/2011 4:03:00 PM
No its clear, you are a poet... And more important you are being you.... bravo, never change for anyone... Michael
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Date: 12/5/2011 9:52:00 PM
If you are new to poetry, as you seem to be saying in your little comment at the bottom here, I would suggest that you get to know other poets. REad their stuff,comment, and learn the forms they like to use. You are like a free verse kind of person. There is something for everybody here. It's all good. I wish you well. Andrea
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Date: 1/14/2011 6:32:00 AM
i know it doesn't make sense,and its kinda grungy,its will only makes sense to me maybe, sorry guys im new to this whole poem thing.
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