Jacqueline Evans Poet I do not know?

Accept Me

i wasn't there,
that was my mistake
i gave you my all
you never did take it,
I thought we had good chemistry
when really i was your worst enemy
it only took one blow
before you go i need to know

did you love me
did we wast our time
are you listening
maybe i shouldn't speak my
mind,if it makes you angry
maybe i should learn how to
speak,im just being me,you should have
accepted  me.

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Michael J. Falotico December 6, 2011 at 4:03 PM No its clear, you are a poet... And more important you are being you.... bravo, never change for anyone... Michael

Andrea Dietrich December 5, 2011 at 9:52 PM If you are new to poetry, as you seem to be saying in your little comment at the bottom here, I would suggest that you get to know other poets. REad their stuff,comment, and learn the forms they like to use. You are like a free verse kind of person. There is something for everybody here. It's all good. I wish you well. Andrea

Jacqueline Evans January 14, 2011 at 6:32 AM i know it doesn't make sense,and its kinda grungy,its will only makes sense to me maybe, sorry guys im new to this whole poem thing.