Abyss

I feel the walls closing in
I want out but the exit’s closed
Drowning now
The water keeps rising
To breathe would mean to take a mouth full of water
God how did this happen?
Please let me out
Lungs screaming for air
There’s none left
Vision going black
I feel my body sinker lower and deeper into the abyss
Sharp pain around my wrist
Gasping, gasping for air
A chance to be free
The driftwood slowly sinking 
What do I do?
I can’t go back
I can’t lose my rescuer
The water starts pulling me down
Please let there be a way out
A few moments bliss in the arms of my rescuer
Before I sink back into the abyss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
January 5, 2010 at 4:05 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Heidi. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol
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January 4, 2010 at 2:58 PM
Heidi, this poem comes with more than a moment of bliss. Welcome to poetry soup, your sublime gift shakes the tree of love; I am honored to read to work as a friend. Continue your journey in words.
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