Abyss

Skulls on the wall of this dark abyss
Forever looking for the end 
Suffocate diminished air
O' endless pit of doom
Why do you insist 
Upon making 
Me suffer?
Please help
Me!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 23, 2009 at 10:57 AM
i peer unto the hole in deep and hear a sad younge man weep breaks my heart in two i feel i must help him out of there o endless pit of doom i plead let him come climbing to me and ill shine upon his brow the light of the moon thats shinning now let me help him please me let me
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