Abu Simbel

Ramesses rules with an iron hand
a god beneath a blistering sky
Hittite chaff fell, he took their land
beneath his chariots wheels they die.
Hundreds were herded slaves all
to serve at the pleasure of the King
man or beast he claimed by might
and for his pleasure they did brawl,
chained, and claimed, few surviving.
He build his cities beneath death's pall.

Worshiped was he in temples true
his semblance graces Abu Simbel       
with eyes wide o'er a lake so blue
his gaze belays the infidels.  
Beside him she, Queen Nefertari
laid claim to a sacred place
held above all others was his wife
most renowned for her beauty
a love to last through time and space
may all true hearts pay such tariff.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mbai Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 1:34 AM
A LOVELY POEM by all standards,a deserved win
Mehta Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 7:51 PM
Nice take on the interpretation and congratulations on the win, Deb
May Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 6:55 PM
great write and win...congrats
Richards Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 6:05 PM
You have done your homework !!! Excellent !!! Well deserved win, Debbie !!
Kamoonpuri Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 2:05 AM
As an amateur Egyptologist i enjoyd dis amazing ballade. Kudos. And warm thnx for d news.
Dunn Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 4:50 PM
Nicely written and alot of historical reverence to the write, good clear visual, loved it actually. thank for your comments on the anicent sport. cheri
Vaso Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 10:22 PM
Love historical poems, great write!
May Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 6:26 PM
very informative write Debbie....well penned....
Matose Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 7:25 AM
A good write Debbie. History poems make a good reading. I've greatly enjoyed this one. Friend, JM
Onclaud Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 12:41 PM
mixing history with personal commentary creates a different, creative blend!... enticed, debbie..:) huggles
Kendrick Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 11:15 AM
Educational work that you have penned about ancient Egypt..Don't know if it is intended for the contest or not but if it is reads like a winner to me..Sara
Kendrick Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 11:20 AM
Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are uplifting..Sara
Situation Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 7:47 PM
history and poetry? somebody has to do it.
Guzzi Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 10:19 AM
true true, and I'm NOT happy with it, still thinking
Dietrich Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 4:03 PM
Very nice how you made it historical, Debs. This contest is a hard one for me. But it's right up your alley. Especially since you were in Egypt and know so much about that area.
Hamilton Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 7:54 AM
showing good knowledge makes this an excellent write Shadow x smile hug
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